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:bulletblue:Give written credit to me for the lines "Lineart by *DestinyBlue" something like that, so people who who drew it.
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:bulletblue:Not for commercial use

I request:
:bulletblue:Please at least attempt to add shadows and highlights, I offer this as a tool for you to learn, if you just flat colour you wont learn anything, think about her character, lighting, mood, and get creative :D

welcome to post and colour as usual

:D
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:iconrain1084:
Rain1084 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
Beyond amazing, how long did it take to draw this?
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:iconintheswamp:
intheswamp Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
coloured it here: Pheonix Crew2b by intheswamp
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:iconjackiereaper:
JackieReaper Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love  the different ink thicknesses!
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:iconrainbowpuffyunicorn:
RainbowPuffyUnicorn Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I colored it !!
I hope you like it =)

[link]
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ShyniMoonStar Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think overall, everyone is pretty well done except for the top girl's hands, as you mentioned. I think it's got to do with the perspective of the fingers or something - because while the thumb and index finger looks like they are in the right perspective - the other two fingers don't seem to be.
I dunno if that makes sense, but I'm thinking this link to an image may help - you see how the hand on the right has cascading fingers? I think that's what you're sorta going for...hopefully it helps!
[link]
I can't wait till it's done and I can give it a shot at colouring it.
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:iconxxendlesssummerxx:
xxEndlessSummerxx Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm making a collab using this lineart if thats ok with you ^^
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:iconfazeofhoppityness:
FazeofHoppityness Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Colored!!!! :D [link]
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:icontinker-leaf:
Tinker-Leaf Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009   Digital Artist
Im colouring this fine lineart, yes? -saves- :]!
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:iconshewhowalkswiththee:
SheWhoWalksWithThee Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I coloured this in. Link: [link]

Hope you like how it came out!
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:iconshewhowalkswiththee:
SheWhoWalksWithThee Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OhmyGawd, totally colouring this!! It may take a few days, or weeks...or years. LOL
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:iconsehcoms:
SehComs Featured By Owner May 24, 2007
I can see some of the stuff you might not like about it but the picture as a whole is really lovely.
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:iconamethystrosepheonix:
AmethystRosePheonix Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2006
Pretty. I really like the third one with her hand out.
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:icondensuo:
Densuo Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*full view of doom*


Pros
The outfits are very nice. girls 1 3 and 4 in particular
Each charecter has defining traits
The girl all in the back, I like the hair.

Cons
The hands are way too small. otherwise nice.
and the eyes although nice, need something more.
third girl's ear is too small

can wait to see the completed version
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:iconanime-luvah:
Anime-luvah Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006
OMG i love this SOO much!! :heart:~ *got your 100th fav* XD
I wanna color it .____. its so adorable the pplz are so cute!! :heart::heart:
the clothes are amazing too :D
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:icontheelfhybrid:
theelfhybrid Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Im sorry that I have no real critique on this picture..I am very very anxious in seeing this in colour! :)
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:iconmuffinsquire:
MuffinSquire Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006  Student Digital Artist
Pheonix crew...from firefly? Or am I crazy...?
First off, amazing line art. <3
The only thing that bothers me about it it the hand of the girl in front. Too small!
And the face of the girl holding the wrench seems...off somehow. not sure how, though.
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:iconburningartist:
BurningArtist Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehe.. I gotta start working on coloring this for the LAJ! >_<
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:iconruskul:
Ruskul Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the overall composition on it and the dynamics of the lines are realy cool ( did you use pen tool in CS ???) any way I would say color it :D
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:iconmimi-riddle:
Mimi-Riddle Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006   Writer
It's amazing!! I can't wait to see it colored.
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:iconealury:
Ealury Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006   Writer
I'll only give you my very first impressions:

The front character's hand seems too small.
The ear of the girl with the two buns is too small. Is what I think. o_O
The right eye of the girl with the tools is somewhat off.
The boobs of the top girl are too... heavy, kinda. She lifts her arms, so they should be lifted too, and not hang down like that. (You should be able to draw that line under her arm down and around her breast, and not use a new line that interferes with the first one.)

These are just impressions. Don't mind them too much. You did a great job there, and I'm positive I couldn't draw that well. :) I'm really looking forward to the colores version.
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:iconthelorddarkwolf:
TheLordDarkWolf Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2006
hmm :) interesting :P simple outlines, but well done :)
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:icon4verme:
4verme Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
i'd like to help but...
it looks good just the way it is... :aww:
so good you can probably go on just coloring it :D
man if only my lines were as half good as yours ^^;
i need to practice...
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:iconlittle-blueshoe:
little-blueshoe Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
i really love the look of the line art i mean the lack of eyes is creepy but neat at the same time!
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DarklightseekerArt Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006
Exceptional line art and line art style you got there. This really looks professional judging by how the contours are made and how most points in the line art are properly used to emphasize a particular anatomical feature. You are certainly a master in this. However, it seems to me that there are parts in the line art that lack the boldness (maybe because there is so much variation in the thickness in the lines) and that they maybe need some of that thickness. Almost everything in the lineart looks perfect (well you could have worked on the hands a bit more (especially the left hand of the 2nd topmost character and the right hand of the 3rd topmost character). The face of the 2nd topmost character seems to be squished by horizontal forces. In retrospect, excellent job.
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:iconjustamuse:
justamuse Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006
:O_o: i want to color it..... can i color it? please? wow.... the details!! on the rope!! cool!!
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:icondestinyblue:
DestinyBlue Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional
Haha im supprised anyone would want to colour it! XD
But sure go ahead! Id be honored ^0^
be sure to tell me when its done :D
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:iconjustamuse:
justamuse Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
will do!!
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diamond-blu-eyes Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006
cant wait to c this coloured! i already :+fav: it. lol. i think its just that the hands all lack a certain...realism to them. thats all. but other than that this pic ROX!!!
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:iconbrokenapollo:
BrokenApollo Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006
The lineart itself is so crisp and clean, I love the variation in boldness and all that. The top girl's hands don't look bad at all, just a little pudgy and short. xD Not enough to look like a problem to me though. The girl below her, the one holding the wrench.. her face looks... too long? The forehead? I think, I can't really tell why it looks a bit weird. I LOVE the girl on the right. She's so cute, and the outfit design is so awesome. She's perfect. xD The one on the bottom is cute too. xD I think her right boob should be.. higher? Great job on making them all interact and look great together. And awesome costume designs!!
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DestinyBlue Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional
Thanks very much for your lovley comment and critiques :D Ill bare them in mind :)
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:iconbrokenapollo:
BrokenApollo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006
You're welcome! I hope I helped. You should have seen it coming when you asked for advanced crits. >D
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:iconthexweirdxsisters:
theXweirdXsisters Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006
The details are awsome!!!0.0!!! Can't wait to see it colored^^
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:iconsweetsnow73:
sweetsnow73 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its very cute! =D
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:iconjreaver:
jreaver Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006   Interface Designer
Oh man! This is really great! Amazing work!!!!! :+fav: You should colour this, really! It'd look stunning if you did! Or can I try? :excited: :P
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:icondestinyblue:
DestinyBlue Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006  Professional
Sure you can colour this! Haha im supprised anyone would want to XD Id be honored :)
:hug:
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:iconjreaver:
jreaver Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2006   Interface Designer
Cool! :XD: I like your signature by the way :P
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:iconblanke:
Blanke Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006
That's a pretty slick composition; I like the variety of poses, expressions, and outfits; it really helps all of their different personalities show through. I'd love to see how this comes to life in color. The girl in the middle (third from the bottom) is my favorite. However, the face of the girl on top looks too fat, and clashes with the rest of that elegant mystic look. Also, the hand on the one that's reaching forward looks like it's in a very uncomfortable pose; like her three fingers are bent at a 90 degree angle.
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:iconseika:
seika Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2006   Artist
X3 whoa, I love the composition of the picture :heart:
the hair of the girl ontop looks so flowy~
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:iconlyn-san:
Lyn-San Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006  Student Digital Artist
145 layers!?!?! *gonk* Dude... I must say it came out wicked!! They all look sooo cute!!>w<
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:iconemathyst:
Emathyst Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006  Student Digital Artist
o wow thats so cool ^^ you have an uber cool style and i love the clothes :3 especially on the girl on the right ^^ and wow this took a long time XD but looks good!! *thumbs up* :3
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:iconeinahpets:
einahpets Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
Your make the coolest outfits I know.

I think it's really cute! It's nice and shap ;)
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:iconpishkin:
Pishkin Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
gah! that's amazing!
The only thing I can say that kinda gets to me on it is the shape of the girl's head second from the top...it looks like she has an overly big forhead...aside from that it's fantastic!!
Will you be adding color to it?
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:iconhermionestar:
HermioneStar Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006  Student General Artist
Haha, I love it. I really like the top girl's hair...it's so long and swirly :3 Can't wait to see the coloured one!
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Random-Skitchies Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
I like the way you outlined it, I hope you are able to color it soon. ^-^ You must have worked extremely hard. Do you have a tablet? I realize you must have photoshop, lucky. -_- I have only paint... That'll change soon enough though. ^_^ As for things that look wrong... Hm... I think that the face of the girl, the one just until the girl at the top, seems a bit deformed I suppose. Like a bit too long perhaps. I love the detailing and the outfits. Very cool and creative. Keep up the good work.
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pixel-Murderer Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
DAMN!!! :faint:

This looks FTASTIC!!!
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Pixy-Brand Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
Wonderful composition! The only critique I can give is on hands. Something about the index finger that is pointing toward the viewer seems off... probably just an angle thing.

Also the hands on the top girl (as you pointed out in the discription) seem a bit stunted. I would suggest maybe lengthing the fingers a bit.

She seems a bit out of place style wise as well. Maybe a bit more detail in the dress? Hard to say on that one though.

Can't wait to see this coloured! Also could I maybe try my hand at colouring the line art? I'm looking for as much practice as possible and I just love your line art.
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DestinyBlue Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006  Professional
Yeah im pretty horrible at hands XD Its my main point im trying to improve at the moment :P
Yeah the top girls dress (hopefully) Will be all embroidered :) I will show that with the colouring so yeah she does look a little plain at the moment :P

Oh wow, im amazed you would be interested in colouring this! Go right ahead! Id love to see the finished work so be sure you tell me ^0^

Thanks very much for your lovley comment :hug:
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:iconpixy-brand:
Pixy-Brand Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
Not a problem. I'm a huge fan of your work so I don't really understand why you would be amazed by my wanting to colour this piece.

I'll be sure to send you a note when I'm done with the colouring :hug:
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:icondestinyblue:
DestinyBlue Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006  Professional
Well one reason I didn't expect anyone would want to colour was because of its size! hehe, its going to take me weeks to do and 5 characters for anyone to colour is a lot :P
Still im very glad you are! :D

Your colouring lovley so I really cant wait to see what you do with it! :glomp:
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Pixy-Brand Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2006
:blush: I'm glad you like my colouring.
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